I missed out the netbook launch day because I was sick but I wanted to go. This is what I could've done.
It was a beautiful sunny day. I was so excited when I walked in the hall. I felt very happy and a bit nervous too.After that I sat down with the box that had our lovely netbooks.There were parents and their children looking around the hall. While I was sitting down I was looking at the decorations around the hall. Then it was time to open the box. I was so happy when I saw our shiny netbooks.
I expected to see our netbooks and I did not expect to see decorations and the movie. What I enjoyed most is turning on the netbook and opening the box.
The netbook will help me by allowing research on the internet ,help with spelling and games could help me on maths games about facts and strategies.
Thank you mum for spending the $40 deposit on my netbook i really appreciate it.so a big thank you mum for my flash netbook
yours sincerely
Makaydyn
5 comments:
Hi Makaydyn I see that you have done a great work about your net book. I know that you weren't there but we had great fun I the hall. I really wanted you to come to school.
Malo lelei,Makaydyn I really like your story based on room9's netbook.Your story is so fun to hear.Why do you like your Netbook.
Hi, Makaydyn nice work about that netbook. I Konw that you weren't there but I enjoyed about your story Makaydyn.
Hi Makaydyn do you like you'er net-book?
anyway you'er story is awesome.
Hi Kaydyn
Like everyone said what an orsum story about your Netbook story and keep up the good work
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